Hi Tom
I like the layout and the flow and agree with the content generally as I wouldn't know any different but couple of things stand out for me
* What is the conclusion - what should someone do next?
* There are a few flying commas in the wrong place ie is'nt and for me even though it is a teeny-tiny thing it then gives doubt about the overall professionalism/content/reliability of information.
Hope that helps and gets the ball rolling with more replies
