Well it is certainly ...err...black! I hope you don't mind but I am going to be a little critical here, although I hope the advise is useful...
First off you need to liven the page up, if your company is promoting branding, it is very unclear from that page, either get some of your client brands looking flashy on that page, or make some new brands up and show off your work that way, first impressions and all that!
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"“We’re a branding solutions company, based in
Liversedge, West Yorkshire...”
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Unless you are only after local work, that has to go, it draws away from your message..."How much more could your company earn if it improved it's image? Our Branding Design and Solutions can make YOUR company stand out from the crowd" in my humble opinion is what you want to say!
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" We could have used this space for some buzzwordy, marketing slogan. But we dont need to. We let our passion, quality of work and superior service exube through previous work samples. "
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Sorry mate, that reads to me like "we could not think of anything to say here!" Is Exube a word? If people want to trust you to rebrand them, then you should show you can use some buzzwordy marketing slogan, if you can't do it for yourself, could I trust you to do it for me?
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We design for a variety of principles, from websites to business cards, as well as providing hosting and printing services. In fact, why not check out the full range of services we offer, on our lovely services page?
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Lovely?! Lovely?...You are supposed to be selling yourself here, your services page may be "loverly" but why not tell perspective clients what you are offering and link through and let them decide...but scrap the word loverly!!!
Two more gripes innovating has two n's and the "Want to hire us - click here!" thing...sheesh, from what your front page shows how would anyone know if they wanted to hire you and if they did, is the wording going to appeal..."Want to hire us"!!!
Sorry Ben, you asked and I am being honest, I think you need to do a lot of work to the fundamentals, as I said this will hopefully help and I trust you won't see it as anything other than a desire to make your business more successful. I think their are times when it is hard to accept or see errors in our own work and I wish you every success.