Thanks for the thanks Kay.... A couple of issues....
I would prefer to see you make a couple of changes
First put the word "and"
All good copy should read out loud easily....so "and" is needed.
Let US design for you
and we PROMISE..
Would prefer to see the first two bullets separate since they are separate points and the combination doesnt flow well..
To Give You a Magical choice
of designs
To Give you outline Ideas
for free
..I also think this would do well....
We will keep working till you love
the design!
And if you dont like it you dont
pay a penny
...until you are ready with the USP/ call to action we discussed , maybe a call to visit the testimonials page of your site
Go to
www.calibre-designs.co.uk now
to see why our customers love us!!