[Inzvestor]

Rob (or Gary?)

Your site copy needs a lot of work

The site does not read too well and doesn't explain what benefits you can bring to both parties (the WIIFM factor is lacking)

The Use Of Caps On All Words Makes It Hard To Read - I Am Not Sure What Purpose This Serves ?

You need to start by selling yourself - shout about the product or service (but don't use caps), centre the page, use emotional images (spending a few £ on royalty free images will make a huge difference to your site)

Obtaining emails and contact details can be done a little more cleverly than using the current methods - there is no call to action and the site does not evoke trust enough to divulge the information.

I realise this review may seem harsh but until you sell yourself on the site then it's not worth considering the methods of getting the details out to the wider audience.