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Two or three thoughts....
Maybe Im an old fogy but I found the text too small....and hard to read...
On the seo front, I would lose your name from the title tags in favour of your location, and some of what you do, you certainly want to try to rank for "IT services st neots" and "computer security cambridgeshire" or whatever.
Take a sneak peak at one of alvins sites, and you will see he lists lot of combinations of keywords at the bottom of the page.....
On the conversion front ...starting with "you" is subsidiiary to "why this"
And give a a list of benefits eg ".. one of the user benefits of a small rather than big company is eg "the buck stops here!" if you take us on, you have my number and my permission to call it 24/7 if you are in trouble" ...even we promise to turn up on time can help!
So start with a ticked checklist of what you do, and your benefits. (eg take a look at indizines site as an example)
And the advice I give to every one, give them a reason to sign up...
eg
How secure is your IT! take this quiz to find out...get them to answer no more than 10 multiple choice questions, then ask for an email address to send the report!!
Or simply a download guide....
"Do you make these deadly mistakes with security" or
"Five ways to speed up your system - without spending another penny"
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And offer to do a free security audit to one company each week, that signs up for the guide (so you can cherry pick, and the half hour audit is your way in to critiqye the system)
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