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15-07-2008, 22:28
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Hi Ian,
I am Pretty petal, pleased to meet you, welcome to A1 A few suggestions for what they are worth  Luna Flowers ~ 'The Immortal essence of nature' Luna Flowers ~ 'Capturing natures fragile beauty' See you around the forum 
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15-07-2008, 23:09
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 im liking "capturing natures fragile beauty"........ 
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15-07-2008, 23:14
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Thanks for all the suggestions (and jokes
 ), I really appreciate your time helping me.I'm a sod for changing my mind  . Now i'm worried if i make it slightly vague my potential customers won't know what I'm actually selling, as only a tiny percent have heard of clay flowers before.Here's what I'm thinking of now: Beautiful Clay Flowers Beautifully Handmade Clay Flowers Everlasting Clay Flowers Everlasting Handmade Clay Flowers Luxury Everlasting Clay Flowers Handmade Clay Flowers an Everlasting Luxury Handmade Clay Flowers - Forever Floral Heaven Again anymore suggestions or thoughts on the above would be hugely helpful (especially as my thesaurus has dyslexia) 
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15-07-2008, 23:29
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Forgot to add I also like IP2's: Designed by Nature - Hancrafted from Clay
If I can get a shortlist, I'll try them out on the market, see what reactions are from customers. P.S. Hi Pretty Petal, great to meet you too. Thanks for your ideas, I might well use them in content on my site or brouchures. Fab
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15-07-2008, 23:40
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hi ian....
my only thoughts on this is that using the word "clay" doesnt do your products justice...... it makes me think of dark sticky mucky clay, instead of the beautiful delicate works of art that your wife makes...sorry.... luna flowers describes what you sell.......flowers.........and by using a strapline like : Beautiful and delicately hand sculptured .... would make me think, ooww i want to see more....... im not saying that is a good strapline im just saying it as an example..... maybe Think about what potential customers might be searching for.......then incorporate the words into your strapline.... i might be on my own with this thought and checking out the best keywords to use for search purposes might help you...
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15-07-2008, 23:41
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Sanook, have you had a brochure designed? My brother has InDesign and I'm waiting for a reason to use it :lol, more than happy to have a look for you for free
,Take care, Ben
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16-07-2008, 05:47
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16-07-2008, 07:42
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Nature - Delicatly Crafted
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16-07-2008, 14:09
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I agree with Fee, using "clay" seems a bit drab
...some wicked suggestions here though - you are spoilt for choice
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16-07-2008, 14:24
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I had a great one
Then got to Pete's post and forgot it :sad1: it's my age I think 
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