My site, your thoughts

[Search2Give]

There are lots of things you could improve on that site, but I'd say the main one would be to include some kind of 'call to action' and make it obvious. When I tried to get to the stage of buying one of your items I couldn't even work out how to! I'd also recommend employing a professional web designer.

Hope this helps.

[accountantpete]

$4 for a pencil seems a bit steep - but the site gets the message across well.

Hope that's not you in the pink jumper dude!

ps $=pounds -must have the US keyboard in my os.

[Hotdesk Genie]

I have a Mr Site website as well and I've been really happy with their built in support but more to the point, knowing a bit about golf, I think you have a great little product!

These guys here have given some really good advice re making your shop more userfriendly, website more spunky etc. but the one thing I would add is that you need to come across sounding a bit more excited about the pen. Every golfer could do with one! At that price, there's no reason why you shouldn't be selling them en masse.

[iamjohns]

maybe you should try to make it cheaper at first so people would get attarcted to good offers then by time increase it or make more offers

[LOS Design UK]

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[LOS Design UK]

maybe you should try to make it cheaper at first so people would get attarcted to good offers then by time increase it or make more offers

Why when the SRP is £5.99???

The price is right, we just need to take it to the market more professionally and agressively which is where we come in

[Indizine]

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As of 15:00hrs 06.06.09 this site re-design is complete and is NOT the subject up for review unless Andrew (OP) requests one.

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[LOS Design UK]

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No worries

I SHALL CONFIRM NOW WITH THE OP BUT

The OP was to review a completely different site and as such it is not pertinent to the review request.

If required, AS I STATED he will request another.

[Indizine]

Hey, dont come over all cocky with me pal

he might request another review of new said site in a ne thread, but no member can in effect close a thread to all further comments i'm afraid.

[LOS Design UK]

Hey, dont come over all cocky with me pal

he might request another review of new said site in a ne thread, but no member can in effect close a thread to all further comments i'm afraid.

Gotcha

Not trying to be cocky nor to close it just stating that this OP is referring to a completely different site...

To meet da rules I have changed my post and I do hope this meets with your approval mein host.