Please take a look at my website

[MikeBoxwell]

I think that looks great. It is the right sort of design for a virtual assistant.

It does suggest you are a small one person business, working from home, but quite frankly, if that is the case that is no bad thing - I presume most of your business comes from other small businesses, many of whom are also working from home, and the personal touch works well.

I would suggest putting a head and shoulders photograph of yourself on the 'About Me' page. Other than that, I have to say it looks pretty good.

[Global Assistant]

Hi Mike
Thanks for the kind words about the website. Yes most of my business does come from other small businesses who also work from home.

Arrghhh - you are right, I do need to put on a photo, and I am working on it - i just hate having my photo taken!

Thank again
Katherine

[AboveParr]

You have a couple of rogue commas in the services page - but I've seen VA sites with far worse!

Looks pretty good

[Global Assistant]

Hi there, just wondered if you could take another quick look at my website. Based on the last lot of comments we have made a few changes, the main one being the colour.
Let me know what you think. Thanks

[Entro]

It looks a vast amount better. A few things:

• 'tarif' has two 'ffs': tariff.
• Intro quote too wordy. It won't be read. You need ten words that are pithy, relevant and instantly scannable.
• Main copy too wordy as well, reduce, break up, use bullet points.
• I hate things that flash. Does it add anything? What?
• I'd rank your services according to what might be demanded rather than what you think important. PA services and Office management should be way above French translation.

And, sometimes it's nice to personalize the 'about me' page with a picture...even a profile.