[Alvin]

Any thoughts on our GPS tracking page from you astute lot of marketeers and web designers.

http://www.thejetworks.co.uk/jetskitracker.htm

Alvin

[Mike]

Alvin,

Information wise i think its fine,

All I would say is that I found it hard to see exactly how i would buy it - If i click on the huge button at the top it went to a paypal page with no details, and there isnt another

Id maybe consider having a buy button at the bottom as when people read down they dont have to search for it, its there waiting for them

hth

[Alvin]

Originally Posted by Mike

Alvin,

Information wise i think its fine,

All I would say is that I found it hard to see exactly how i would buy it - If i click on the huge button at the top it went to a paypal page with no details, and there isnt another

Id maybe consider having a buy button at the bottom as when people read down they dont have to search for it, its there waiting for them

hth

Thanks we have a shopping cart on our other site which will incorporate proper payment page.I just knocked this page up as a tester.

Alvin

[Mike]

in that case i think its quite good - the information is fairly well done and laid out

[PremierPDS]

Great product Al but you forgot to mention the real advantage...how about something like this:

Think your wife/husband is having an affair?
Want to track their movements without the expense of hiring a PI?
This handy little device lets you do just that- go on, all you need is some duct tape and access to the underneath of their car seat and you'll have all the proof you need to enable you to keep the house and his pension- oh, and not forgetting the dog!

What d'ya reckon?

[Alvin]

Originally Posted by PremierPDS

Great product Al but you forgot to mention the real advantage...how about something like this:

Think your wife/husband is having an affair?
Want to track their movements without the expense of hiring a PI?
This handy little device lets you do just that- go on, all you need is some duct tape and access to the underneath of their car seat and you'll have all the proof you need to enable you to keep the house and his pension- oh, and not forgetting the dog!

What d'ya reckon?

I know its hard for you at your tender age to appreciate,but there are other things in life besides tracking the geographical location of the human races genitals.

Alvin

[PI Guy]

Originally Posted by PremierPDS

Great product Al but you forgot to mention the real advantage...how about something like this:

Think your wife/husband is having an affair?
Want to track their movements without the expense of hiring a PI?
This handy little device lets you do just that- go on, all you need is some duct tape and access to the underneath of their car seat and you'll have all the proof you need to enable you to keep the house and his pension- oh, and not forgetting the dog!

What d'ya reckon?

For that you need is this

[Alvin]

Originally Posted by PI Guy

For that you need is this

Oh what a suspicous minded lot you are.

P.S I never thought of that,have to give it a whirl got to have our USP whatever that is.

A

[PremierPDS]

Originally Posted by Alvin

I know its hard for you at your tender age to appreciate,but there are other things in life besides tracking the geographical location of the human races genitals.

Alvin

The geographic location of the human races genitals is a hot topic Al, you're missin out...I'm sure PI guy has been hired to sniff a few philanderers out over the years. I've not got a suspicious mind myself but I know lots and lots and lots of people who have and who'd defo be interested in a tracking device!!!

[PI Guy]

You know I'm going to be selling these myself before too long.