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Old 12-06-2008, 16:21
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i want to re - buff my website. - i'm not allowed to put my site in here so if you googled 'new reality ltd' its the top answer :

New Reality: Creative video production & photography

i'd appreciate it if you went through my website and mentioned:

what is it missing?
did anything confuse you?
what did you not like about the design of it?
if you were looking to buy something from me what would you look for? (was it there)
what did you think was good that there should be more of?
should it be simpler?

or anything else you"d like to add.

i'd appreciate it (constructive criticism anyway not hate mail! ha)

my feelings are prepared for a beating.
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I have moved this to the review section for you
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i dont know about the white table in the white table...

Maybe get rid of the bigger table? and have the content table 98% width? and have the footer text just beneath...
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your images are crap for a photographers site

Min size : http://photoneckel.eu/cpg/albums/peo...a/_D300199.jpg

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Min size : http://photoneckel.eu/cpg/albums/peo...a/_D300199.jpg

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Its very hard on the eyes and you need more uniformity on things like links, there are too many variations.

Id move away from white and think about better organisation. this page looks a mess http://www.newrealityltd.com/index.php?section=2
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I was trying to be helpfull (constructive criticism )

For any site flogging art ,Images are the be all and end all.

Stunning pictures speak a thousand words in that game.

all right crap may be a bit harsh but its honest.

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i want to re - buff my website. - i'm not allowed to put my site in here so if you googled 'new reality ltd' its the top answer :

New Reality: Creative video production & photography

i'd appreciate it if you went through my website and mentioned:

what is it missing?
did anything confuse you?
what did you not like about the design of it?
if you were looking to buy something from me what would you look for? (was it there)
what did you think was good that there should be more of?
should it be simpler?

or anything else you"d like to add.

i'd appreciate it (constructive criticism anyway not hate mail! ha)

my feelings are prepared for a beating.
Hi

Could not get in for the last hour to review for you sire, so will try tomorrow...
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Not a fan of the layout of black with white bordering and while I won't go quite as far as Alvin, I think the pictures need some work.

However beyond the cosmetics, what really hit me was the need to break down your customers into groups more precisely and I wonder if that is achievable from one site or without some kind of walling.

What I am getting at is...at the budget end of what you do, you offer portraits at under £100, the perspective customer for that will flick around and see you offering services for 2 or 3K and will feel either that they are missing hidden costs or that they will be pretty insignificant and receive a service that reflects that. At the upper end, they will feel you are not a specialist in your field and perhaps look elsewhere.

Basically you are trying to touch too many bases with one brand and confusing everyone. I would suggest either:
a/. Create a separate site for corporate
b/. Remove all visible pricing
c/. Split the site more clearly to appeal to the different markets

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