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Hello All!

I have finally finished my online greeting card shop Butterfly Sundae. It hasn't had any SEO magic worked on it yet but i would love you all to have a look and have some feedback esp on. the card designs and the usability.

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Hi yes it does look good but one thing is it all feels a little cramped but very good
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It's a nice clean and attractive design Sarah. Well done.

My only comment viewing it on a larger display is that some of the text is a tad small. It would appear you have set it up to viewed down to an 800 x 600 pixel display which IMHO is beyond the lower level that 99% of people use these days. I would increase the width to be used on a 1024 x 768 display minimum which gives you about 960 pixels width to work in. By doing that you could increase the font size a tad without shovelling any more text off the bottom of the fold.

Hope that helps,
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Sarah its lovely, I do agree with the font - a little small, but otherwise its easy to get around, tidy and very cute.
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Great design Sarah.

Its very soft and appealing.
Same as others - text is a little too small to read.
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Hi Sarah,

The site is gorgeous and I love the name! I found it easy to use and like the fact that the pictures expand making them easier to view. I would definately buy from your site as it is warm and inviting. Agree about the font size but apart from that, really like it. Well Done!

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Thanks very much guys, i have increased the font size on the products page just trying to work out how to do it for the menu links!
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Hi Sarah,

Really nice site, although I would think about losing the introduction page so visitors go straight to the shop, then have an About Us page for that info?

Try changing this in your CSS for the text size in the menu...
#navigation div.pod {styles.css (line 191)
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Hi Sarah,

Really nice site, although I would think about losing the introduction page so visitors go straight to the shop, then have an About Us page for that info?

Try changing this in your CSS for the text size in the menu...
#navigation div.pod {styles.css (line 191)
font-size:10px;

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Yes, good point Greg I agree that going straight into the shop would be better.

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