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Old 15-07-2008, 11:05
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Well, the site has been up and running for a little while now and we're getting a good response.

We've got pages for each aspect of the business, with the main focus being on vehicles. The trouble is, so far all of the offers that I've put up have been for contract hire without, I feel, enough emphasis on other types of car brokerage such as outright purchase.

I'm thinking about adding another page to emphasise that we really can do anything with regards to supplying new vehicles, and possibly starting another site altogetther 9with links to and from) focussing entirely on vans.

We can supply virtually any make and model of car, van, or 4x4, and usually at prices much lower than the offers available from main dealers - but getting that message across to the right people and in a big enough way is one hell of a job!

Enough waffle... please take a look and let me know what you think would be good and what would encourage you to buy from us. how can we change/improve the site to give you, the buyer, what you need to see?

Thanks in advance for your time.

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I have taken a look round your site quite a few times and this is purely my opinion, I would like to see more cars...with the car page broken down a tad further into sub pages of either manufacturer or class, which could also offer you more SEO options.
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I did think of that avenue, but it's bloody hard work (am i allowed to say "bloody"? If I'm not allowed to say "bloody" then I'm bloody well sorry that i did and it won't bloody happen again!).

The trouble is that there are so many manufacturers and models that you could go on to an almost endless list - and updating that would be a nightmare!

What i would like to do is give a good flavour of what we can do and emphasise that we can litereally do anything - "Just call for a quote" sort of thing.

I do agree though that we should have more cars and vans on the site - hence me wanting to start up a "sister" site dedicated to cans and commercials.

Thanks for the feedback - I do appreciate it.

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