I'm a beggin' again!

boxby · #1 (**permalink**) 11-07-2008, 11:23

OK. The SEO on the boxby site left a lot to be desired. So, i've been listening, and learning, and the new design is nearly finished.

I've got the text, content, keywords, title & description ready for putting on the new home page. And I was wondering if there were any kind SEO people who would take a quick flick over it to see if i'm on track, or miles off.

Many thanks
Sandra

nass · #2 (**permalink**) 12-07-2008, 14:50

Seems ok to me - with sites and SEO you can always do more but I don't see anything especially wrong with it

IP2 · #3 (**permalink**) 12-07-2008, 17:05

Might want to elaborate slightly wider than the word 'cheap' with words such as 'low cost 'discounted' etc to catch a wider range of possibilities.

Also perhaps a slight emphasis on secure, safe, fast if you want to try and widen the catch from just people after price. (I will expand on that, i what I have written doesn't make sense).