[MKat]

Peter, your leaflet looks great. I had read through this thread before reviewing the leaflet so I knew about the 'grammatical' error- but even then I didn't spot it until second read - 'how weird is that' - I think it should slip through un-noticed.

IMO: Excellent idea to send samples, attention grabbing front graphic and headline - I particularly like the reference to people walking out with school computers, as this is becoming more of a problem in schools with new computer suites and the staff confidence issue. Fingers crossed for loads of lovely large orders

[Andy Trish]

Originally Posted by MKat

I particularly like the reference to people walking out with school computers, as this is becoming more of a problem in schools with new computer suites and the staff confidence issue.

How true is that, I sold 5 laptops and 70 PCs to a school with them set up in their Suite over the holidays last summer, 2 days later I had a call from the head saying he knew he had signed for them all and that he saw them after we left but had we come back and removed 2 laptops for any reason?

it turns out he found them on ebay the next day, 1 of the builders in the school had removed them.

Pete I too didn't notice the error until it was pointed out here. If you look on my site in the schools section there is a PDF download written by Microsoft and their vast team, you'll find the content repeated twice in sections (they hadn't spotted it and printed millions.)

I still say well done all....

[pvcprinting]

Thanks all,

Like I have said the blame is laid firmly at my door....it is me who signed it off and sent it to print

As requested below is an image with the sample card attached to complete the picture

http://i253.photobucket.com/albums/h...oolsFlier1.jpg

Thanks all again

Regards

Pete

[Cracking Media]

Originally Posted by pvcprinting

For those that wanted to see the design am sure the people concerned will not mind if i post links to them now they are public

http://i253.photobucket.com/albums/h...printing33.jpg
http://i253.photobucket.com/albums/h...intingback.jpg

Great job guys! I think the imagery on the front page is excellent. It really grabs your attention and compels you to read more. Very clever design - well done!

Peter

[Calibre Designs]

Andy, Pete -

Will you keep us all updated on how the campaign goes? Would be really interesting to know. Its for a good cause!

[Andy Trish]

definately, I'm finalising the last of my material then releasing it, and monitoring all results closely.