Special Thanks

Calibre Designs · #1 (**permalink**) 13-05-2008, 14:22

Our previous web banner advert on A1 was pretty pants as commented by Admagic. To be fair, it was designed in just under 10mins. With his comments and advice taken on board, we have created a new one that is now featured at the top.

Thanks to Admagic for stirring up some thoughts and suggestions.

Thanks to Vicky for pointing out some mistakes yesterday.

Thanks to Khalid for putting up with me.

There is only one more thing up my sleeve that will work as an offer but we are not quite ready to launch yet. So what do you think? *ears closed now...*

Indizine · #2 (**permalink**) 13-05-2008, 15:08

I noticed it was a big improvement Kay! Great USP there too.

pvcprinting · #3 (**permalink**) 13-05-2008, 15:23

Kay,

I like it....alot of info on there to be fair

Only poimt I can see is the orange "lets us design for you" does not stand out and is difficult to read

Regards

Pete

Littledot · #4 (**permalink**) 13-05-2008, 15:45

I think it is a real improvement Kay. You can see clearly what you do and what you are offering!

Gemma

Calibre Designs · #5 (**permalink**) 13-05-2008, 15:51

Thanks a lot especially from two of you who have used our services

admagic · #6 (**permalink**) 20-05-2008, 23:10

Thanks for the thanks Kay.... A couple of issues....

I would prefer to see you make a couple of changes

First put the word "and"
All good copy should read out loud easily....so "and" is needed.

Let US design for you
and we PROMISE..

Would prefer to see the first two bullets separate since they are separate points and the combination doesnt flow well..

To Give You a Magical choice
of designs

To Give you outline Ideas
for free

..I also think this would do well....

We will keep working till you love
the design!

And if you dont like it you dont
pay a penny

...until you are ready with the USP/ call to action we discussed , maybe a call to visit the testimonials page of your site

Go to www.calibre-designs.co.uk now
to see why our customers love us!!

Calibre Designs · #7 (**permalink**) 20-05-2008, 23:18

Thanks Ad. It all makes sense. Providing that we can live up to those standards/promises which we clearly can, I have no problems with implementing that!!

Great pointers....

Kay